Sunday, June 21

Father - A silent song!



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17 comments:

  1. Good going mate! Continue the good work

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  2. Hey man, dont look at me for everything. u hav to learn atleast something frm ur own father.

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  3. I really liked this post , beautifully captured thoughts and feelings of a growing young man.The only positive critisism I would make is that you need to read and edit some sentences to read grammatically correct to polish the post.

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  4. *Applaud Applaud^ I really liked the perspective u chose here.. Interesting and honest at the same time..Made for good readin.. I agree wid angel.. U could better the eng a lil bit tho!!!

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  5. well done mate..fathers show us the way v hav to live our lives.! no offense against him for being so hard on u at tat tender age..its benefitting u aftr 11 years..and tat fruit l b ter wit u till u die.!
    good job

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  6. Father's Day Special?? Ohh... u r a "Papa BOy"!! lol. fumbling in Eng!! ha ha..U will not get out of this!!This time I wont support U!! lol..Jokes apart!!
    This is a very serious and very true class art from you. I have read so many articles on love of mother, father's lov sometimes knowingly kept aside.
    The way you finished "I fear, whether I could ever ask mom how she felt when you first touched her. That deep I want to be like you...!! " Omg!!! No match for this line... !0/10 again

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  7. Btw...Who is ASR?? ' Very Cheap comment :x'

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  8. loved this post daa

    really touching

    even my dad was like that

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  10. Sriram: thx man!

    ASR: 'Be a MAN'!! ;)!!

    angel from heaven: Editing is some thing I can't do! thx may try my best!!

    Tabitha: Sometimes fingers fumble whn yo write abt someone spcl! thx alot!

    dj: Yep! :)

    Bhanu {1}: !0/10??? :( u mean "!ZERO/TEN!!" :(
    jus kidding thx alot gal!! Keep supporting me (Eng)...!!

    Bhanu {2}: He is a 'Cheap' factory owner!! nevermind ;)

    The solitary writer: dady kool!!! :)

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  11. You boyz are all similar...ASR- Owner of a cheap factory!!! ahhh!!

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  13. "Somebody Went on Tears Reading this Piece...!!
    I NEVER REALISED THIS PIECE CAN HURT ANY ONE! Apology!
    cheers all!!
    vl b back!!!

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  14. Awwwww.... Okie... Was really disappointed to c it gone!!! But it goes to show ur a really sensitive man.. Sensitive to the needs of those around you...

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  15. Thank God that I have copied something out of that post in my comment!!
    Its so sad u deleted this post!!!!

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