Sunday, June 21

Father - A silent song!



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17 comments:

  1. SriramJune 22, 2009 12:06 am

    Good going mate! Continue the good work

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  2. ASRJune 22, 2009 12:08 am

    Hey man, dont look at me for everything. u hav to learn atleast something frm ur own father.

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  3. angel from heavenJune 22, 2009 1:32 am

    I really liked this post , beautifully captured thoughts and feelings of a growing young man.The only positive critisism I would make is that you need to read and edit some sentences to read grammatically correct to polish the post.

    http://cutestangel.wordpress.com/

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  4. TabithaJune 22, 2009 1:38 am

    *Applaud Applaud^ I really liked the perspective u chose here.. Interesting and honest at the same time..Made for good readin.. I agree wid angel.. U could better the eng a lil bit tho!!!

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  5. AnonymousJune 22, 2009 3:08 am

    well done mate..fathers show us the way v hav to live our lives.! no offense against him for being so hard on u at tat tender age..its benefitting u aftr 11 years..and tat fruit l b ter wit u till u die.!
    good job

    buddy do check my blog too
    www.d-bucks.blogspot.com

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  6. BhanuJune 22, 2009 10:56 am

    Father's Day Special?? Ohh... u r a "Papa BOy"!! lol. fumbling in Eng!! ha ha..U will not get out of this!!This time I wont support U!! lol..Jokes apart!!
    This is a very serious and very true class art from you. I have read so many articles on love of mother, father's lov sometimes knowingly kept aside.
    The way you finished "I fear, whether I could ever ask mom how she felt when you first touched her. That deep I want to be like you...!! " Omg!!! No match for this line... !0/10 again

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  7. BhanuJune 22, 2009 10:59 am

    Btw...Who is ASR?? ' Very Cheap comment :x'

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  8. The Solitary WriterJune 22, 2009 4:34 pm

    loved this post daa

    really touching

    even my dad was like that

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  9. S A J I T HJune 22, 2009 5:17 pm

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  10. S A J I T HJune 22, 2009 5:18 pm

    Sriram: thx man!

    ASR: 'Be a MAN'!! ;)!!

    angel from heaven: Editing is some thing I can't do! thx may try my best!!

    Tabitha: Sometimes fingers fumble whn yo write abt someone spcl! thx alot!

    dj: Yep! :)

    Bhanu {1}: !0/10??? :( u mean "!ZERO/TEN!!" :(
    jus kidding thx alot gal!! Keep supporting me (Eng)...!!

    Bhanu {2}: He is a 'Cheap' factory owner!! nevermind ;)

    The solitary writer: dady kool!!! :)

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  11. AkshayJune 22, 2009 5:42 pm

    Cool Site

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  12. BhanuJune 23, 2009 5:38 pm

    You boyz are all similar...ASR- Owner of a cheap factory!!! ahhh!!

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  13. AnonymousJune 23, 2009 5:59 pm

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  14. S A J I T HJune 23, 2009 10:07 pm

    "Somebody Went on Tears Reading this Piece...!!
    I NEVER REALISED THIS PIECE CAN HURT ANY ONE! Apology!
    cheers all!!
    vl b back!!!

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  15. TabithaJune 24, 2009 3:12 pm

    Awwwww.... Okie... Was really disappointed to c it gone!!! But it goes to show ur a really sensitive man.. Sensitive to the needs of those around you...

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  16. NevermindJune 24, 2009 6:53 pm

    Hello...wher is da post??

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  17. BhanuJuly 03, 2009 11:45 am

    Thank God that I have copied something out of that post in my comment!!
    Its so sad u deleted this post!!!!

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